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英语四级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 01:大学生住在校外好还是宿舍好

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大学英语四级考试作文,比较对照型作文预测范文及点评话题1,大学生住在校外好还是宿舍好。

Topic 1 Which Do You Prefer-Living on or out of the Campus?
1.一些大学生认为住在校外好
2.另一些大学生认为住学生宿舍好
3.我的看法

Which Do You Prefer-Living on or out of the Campus?

As regards the choice between college students' living on and out of the campus,there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. People who lend their support to living out of the campus argue that this kind of independent life will protect their privacy and help individual development,which will then make college life more diversified and colorful.

By contrast,others hold that college students should live on campus. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily,a high proportion of parents as high as 98. 8 percent believe that collective life will benefit their children in shaping them to be well disciplined. What's more , campus can provide students with a safe living environment and good academic atmosphere.

As far as I am concerned,the best choice is living on campus,by which I can acquire the art of interpersonal communication through living with people from different places.(152词)

“一句话”点评

第二段的一个百分比和大写China Daily抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。而conduct , a proportion of等好词和短语的运用及believ后紧跟的宾语从句的使用,无疑增加了亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:在模板句引入话题后接着提出首段中心“一些大学生认为住在校外好”,并用protect their privacy和help individual development两个原因来支持段落中心。

第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“另一些大学生认为住学生宿舍好”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,说明相当大比例的家长认为校园的集体生活有利于孩子养成良好的纪律。最后呈现另一个并列的原因:校园生活提供一个安全的环境和良好的学术氛围。

第三段:直接展现自己观点,并提出简要的一个原因,不做更深层次的展开。

美丽词句
(1)protect their privacy保护隐私
(2)individual development个人发展
(3)diversified and colorful丰富多彩
(4)a safe living environment安全的生活环境
(5)good academic atmosphere好的学术氛围

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